Two weeked ago,I didn't write more about The Pursuit of Happyness because I learned about English Central.I liked it very much. Through this program, I can practice reading,listening,speaking, and many new vocabularies. I'm very happy.
Thank you Teacher for setting up this program.Today,I continue to write about Chris'life.
After he lost a scanner machine,he didn't give up. Losing one machine meant he could not afford for food for that month. He still applied for a new class. He still called Dr.Delsey for saling his scanner. Suddenly,he saw the hippy girl, who had stolen his scanner. He followed her and took back his scanner.Then, he picked up his son in the day care and came back home.He had a trouble with his wife. His wife walked out.
Once again,he met Mr.Twistle. He wantted to told him, but Mr.Twisle was very busy. He he got into a taxi. Chris still didn't give up,he asked to share a ride with Mr.Twistle in Taxi.He tried to persuade Mr.Twistle and he had done.
A great summary, Dung. And I am so glad you like English Central. You have an excellent use of past tense verbs here!
ReplyDeleteA few changes:
many new vocabularies -- much new vocabulary (uncountable noun)
for saling - to sell
wantted to told him - wanted to talk to him
He he to When he
he tried to persuade - he tried to impress Mr. Twistle with what he had done