In Mr. Putter's backyard plant apples, tomatoes, pears... he dreamed of apple pie and apple turnovers, he dreamed of hot apple cider with a cinnamon stick. When he was a boy, he loved pear jelly. Now he was old , but he still liked to pick the pears. He found a ladder for picking the pears, but he had a problem, he had cranky legs, cranky knees, cranky feet. And he thought, he made a slingshot, he aimed at a pear in the tree and pulled back as hard as he could. He shot so many apples at the pears, that he forget about the time. When he was finished, he had no apples and no pear jelly
The next afternoon, Mr. Putter and Tabby were feeling very sad, because they still had no pear jelly. Suddenlly Mr. Putter's neighbor Mrs. Teaberry and her good dog, Zeke came, she was carrying a big basket, she made an apple feast. she had fourteen apple turnovers, five apple pies, six apple jellies, and a gallon of hot apple cider with cinnamon sticks.
Mr. Putter and Tabby ate juicy things and apple pie. He would get slingshot in next fall .
The next afternoon, Mr. Putter and Tabby were feeling very sad, because they still had no pear jelly. Suddenlly Mr. Putter's neighbor Mrs. Teaberry and her good dog, Zeke came, she was carrying a big basket, she made an apple feast. she had fourteen apple turnovers, five apple pies, six apple jellies, and a gallon of hot apple cider with cinnamon sticks.
Mr. Putter and Tabby ate juicy things and apple pie. He would get slingshot in next fall .
Nice summary, Dung! YOu did a good job using the phrases from the book. A few things to change:
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The next afternoon
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